Word Play; Child’s Play

Word Translation

Over the weekend I experienced the delightful company of my four-year-old grandson, Ethan.  We had one of our fun-filled date/sleepovers.  As a word-lover to the core, I am fascinated how children hear words and how they translate them into their language.

Since it was such a lovely spring day, Ethan and I had a picnic out on the patio.  Because of Be A Novelistpesky flies, I made sure I had my flyswatter close by.  At one point Ethan started to grab the swatter end, and I admonished him not to touch it while eating.

“Oh yeah, ” he said, “because it’s all fly-gut-ty.”

Hm. Took the words right out of my mouth, Ethan.  That’s exactly how I would have said it.  Not!

Makes perfect sense, right?  The flyswatter is all fly-gut-ty!

Be A NovelistEggs Need Crushing

At breakfast I let him break eggs into a bowl and then use the egg beater to whip up our scrambled eggs.  Later, after we’d enjoyed our scrambled egg breakfast, Ethan said, “That was fun using the egg-crusher.”

Of course. How descriptive. The egg-crusher!  It did indeed crush the eggs.

Don’t you love it?

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At one point during the visit, Ethan asked me, “What is a mechanic?”

Great question. I carefully explained that a mechanic is a person who knows all about motors and engines and can fix them.  Of course as verbose as I am, I added lots of details.  After patiently waiting for me to finish, he asked, “Then why do we put them in the pool?”

The pool?  I was lost.

“Yes,” he said, “we put them in the pool to keep it clean.”

“Ah,” I said. “Do you mean chemicals?”

He giggled. “Sometimes, I get my words all mixed up.”

As do we all, Ethan. As do we all!

Chemicals. Mechanics. Do they sound similar to you? I’m looking at how they are spelled.  Many of the same letters in each.

Be A NovelistFodder for the Journal

I find this fascinating. Absolutely fascinating.

More fodder for my journal!  Memories for me and for Ethan.  And who knows – one of these may end up in a future novel.

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If Only I Knew Where Only Belongs. If I Only Knew…?

Be A NovelistWriter is Clueless

For being such a small, seemingly-insignificant, four-letter, word, only is known for giving writers fits.  Sometimes this little modifier gives a writer fits, but the writer is clueless. As a result the writing is ambiguous and unclear, and the writer never quite knows why.

Writing, it has been said, is clear thinking on paper.  Clarity is key, because whatever can be misunderstood will be misunderstood.

The Rule

The rule to apply to make a renegade only come into line is this:Be A Novelist

Place modifiers as close as possible to the words they are intended to modify.

Therefore, in the title of this blog, the second placement of only is correct. The first choice – If only I knew… — denotes that I would be the only person who know where only belongs.

Wily Only

Let’s take a statement and let this crazy little four-letter word show just how wily he can be:

  •           Only Charles wept for the loss of his pet dog.
  •           Charles only wept for the loss of his pet dog.
  •           Charles wept only for the loss of his pet dog.
  •           Charles wept for the loss of his only pet dog.
  •           Charles wept for the loss of his pet dog only.

Each sentence give a different meaning, some almost imperceptibly, others more clearly.

Why Bother?

I’m sure some who read this will say “So what? Isn’t this just a lot of nitpicking? Is it really worth all the bother?”

It’s worth the bother only if you are a lover of clear writing – and if you are concerned with accuracy, and if you have little patience with muddled sentences and ambiguity.

Be A NovelistRespect for Your Reader

Causing confusion for your reader can be interpreted as your lack of concern for the reader.  If the reader feels you care little about him or her; why should that reader feel compelled to trust you as author? Respect for reader should be uppermost in the mind of all professional authors/novelists/writers.  (More about respect for reader HERE.)

The slippery little only is one of many such problem areas that demand the attention of the writer who is sold out to perfecting the craft of writing. Are you that sold-out writer? Then…

Only pay attention if you fit that description.Be A Novelist

Pay attention only if you fit that description.

Pay attention if you only fit that description.

Pay attention if you fit only that description.

Okay, okay! You get the picture!

Strive to be the best writer you can be! You’ll never be sorry.

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I trust the teaching and instruction given in this blog post was helpful in your goal to be a novelistFor more in-depth writer’s workshops, check out the wide variety offered at the Be A Novelist Website.

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Are you one of those budding novelists who makes a great start but you can’t seem to finish?  Then this is for you!  Be A Novelist, Six-Month, Finish-My-Novel Challenge!  Six full months of guidance and instruction. Guaranteed to light a fire under your novel-writing attempts and to launch you into a pattern of consistent writing! Check it out here!

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