Dissecting a Novel

Dissecting in Zoology LabBe A Novelist

Were you fortunate enough to have the joy and privilege of dissecting a creature either in your high school or college biology lab class?

My high school in a small Kansas town had no biology lab, but when I took a zoology class in college, it was a different story altogether.  Any number of creature-dissecting activities was in progress in the lab at any given time – each creature being a bit larger and more complex than the one previous.

In spite of being fairly squeamish at that time in my life (before the diaper-changing era), I discovered that I had a fascination with the dissecting process. I enjoyed learning how neat and orderly each was put together – from the insects, to the amphibians, to the mammals.

Be A NovelistDissecting in Novel-Writing Lab

In a similar fashion, I was taught early on in my writing career how to dissect a novel.  Have you ever tried it?  Just as with dissecting a frog or a fetal pig, dissecting a novel will reveal to you exactly how it is put together.

Hopefully, as an aspiring novelist, you are already aware of the difference between reading as a reader and reading as a writer.  Reading as a writer means you no longer allow yourself the leisure of skimming, or even relaxing with the story. Rather you are studying, digging, assessing, and yes, even dissecting.

Choose the Author and the GenreBe A Novelist

The first step is to choose an author that you love and admire and whose work you enjoy reading.  Their genre may be the same genre you write in, but not necessarily. I love (read that LOVE) Rosamunde Pilcher but I have never written in her particular genre.  Her pacing and her style fascinate me.

Various Methods

The act of dissecting a novel can be approached any number of ways. Some approach it merely by reading – often accompanied by voracious note-taking as the reading progresses.

Others type out a chapter or two (or more) of the novel being studied in order to soak up the feel of writing those same words in the same pattern and in the same style.  This can work as a magical moment for you.  It’s rather like having a tennis pro, or golf pro guide your hands while teaching you the intricacies of the game.

No need to fear that you will actually end up copying that author’s style.  The more you write your own materials, the more your own style will come to the surface. (It cannot not happen!) Even the best artists closely study the masters.

My Favorite Method

My favorite dissecting method is to use highlighter markers of various hues.  I go through and highlight action scenes, slower-paced scenes, transitions, alternating scenes and sequels, and so on.  You get the idea.  The more I delve into this exercise the more enlightened I become.  (Similar to digging down into the entrails of that frog to see how neatly every organ is arranged.)

It’s fun to then step back and survey the colorful panorama.  Suddenly, the patterns of speeding up and slowing down the pace are no longer hidden but clearly revealed. Also revealed are techniques such as smooth transitions, time breaks, POV switches, and cliff-hanger chapter endings.

Be A Novelist Give it a Whirl

If you’ve never enjoyed this experience I encourage you to give it a whirl. Being a student of your craft is imperative if you want to achieve quality in your art.

Dissecting a novel is great fun, and not nearly as smelly as a formaldehyde-soaked fetal pig.

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Use Your Pencil Lead to X out Misuse of Led! Please!

Be A NovelistOmigoodness!  I saw it again.  In a published book.  Not just once, mind you. One time and I would have chalked it up to a typo. But twice within just a few pages.  If the book had not been required reading for necessary research, I would have cast it aside and never picked it up again.

Lead – a Mineral

Lead is a mineral! It is a noun, not a verb. (Pronounced led.) There can be no past tense of a noun.

Lead – an Action Verb

If you are a leader and you lead someone (pronounced leed), then (past tense) you led them. Even past participle is led. As in “She’s led the club for several years.”  

Three little letters L-E-D!  You led them.  Not – You lead them!

Here are exact quotes from said naughty book that I longed to toss across the room:

“…if your GPS device is like mine, it has probably lead you astray at least once…”

“…you now realize that those duties lead you to land the next few jobs…”

I am not making this up.

Twice in 23 Pages

This means the glaring error passed under the noses of the author, the editors, and the proofreaders (that is, trusting there were proofreaders).

I said it occurred twice in this culprit book.  But I must add that I am now on page 23.  Total pages in the book – 241.  I may see it again in the near future.  (Or other closely related family members.)

I hasten to add that the subject matter of this non-fiction book is handled expertly.  Its tone contains a combination of well-presented facts and well-placed touches of humor.  However, the led/lead experience soured me on the book.

Soured

Rather like going to the fridge to grab the milk container. You pour a tall glass full, head to the couch with your handful of Oreos and settle in for a nice treat.  The first gulp tells the tale. The milk’s gone sour.  That glass of milk still looks good, but you’re probably not going to want to finish the whole glass.

My Rare Rant

Those of you who follow my Be A Novelist blog site can attest to the fact that I seldom rant.  This is my rant for the year. (Quarter? Month? I don’t want to box myself in.) smile

Do Yourself a Favor

Can I make the case any stronger than this?Be A Novelist

If you respect your reader (and want to be respected by your reader), if you want to be “heard” through your writing, if you long to have a career as a novelist (or any other type of writer/author), do yourself and your readers a huge favor – invest whatever time and sacrifice it takes to study the English language in general, and grammar in particular.

Get the lead out and DO it!

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I trust the teaching and instruction given in this blog post was helpful in your goal to be a novelistFor more in-depth writer’s workshops, check out the wide variety offered at the Be A Novelist Website.

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Are you one of those budding novelists who makes a great start but you can’t seem to finish?  Then this is for you!  Be A Novelist, Six-Month, Finish-My-Novel Challenge!  Six full months of guidance and instruction. Guaranteed to light a fire under your novel-writing attempts and to launch you into a pattern of consistent writing! Check it out here!

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